Monday 3 August 2009

Three...Seven...Seven

So we were sitting there in the palace grounds, enjoying the wind and the setting sun. I was almost-pestering him about how he needed to settle down, find someone and be all set for the lightning to strike..

That was when she walked in.

She had a very nicely etched out Indian face, sharp features and a very Indo-Gothic look. Smokey eyes, black nail polish, nose piercing. A fine blend. She walked around lazily, taking pictures of this and that, and then she saw us. Him rather. The photographer beside me was trying very hard to show that he wasn’t interested, but his eyes betrayed him each time and they kept darting back to her.

I tried coaxing him to go over and talk. But he preferred his eyes fencing with hers and adding mystery to the beautiful evening. Talking would ruin it all he said. You might be missing out on something huge, was my take. Understanding the shy American and knowing that he didn’t want to verbalize anymore I resumed talking nonchalantly about other random things, something I’m getting extremely good at…

As my curfew drew closer, we decided to wrap up the day..Picking up all of our belongings I looked at the girl who by now was engrossed in a photo shoot of her self, and willed her to come over. But she was too caught up inventing new postures and playing around with the self timer. As we walked away the two barely looked at each other and I laughed playfully, making me feel like I was in high school all over again.

But as we neared the park gates, a voice called out to us, we turned around to see her running to catch up with us. I nudged my friend and threw him the “See I told you!” look and I was happy that the girl decided to make the first move. I smiled as I saw her approach. Atta girl.

And as she spoke to us, it was obvious that I was right. There was only a small mistake though. It wasn’t him that she was interested in, it was me.

27 comments:

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

:) liked the ending and wow.. great describing the munute features of her !! but yeah, the caption was all that i needed to guess about the post ! but still, its a job well done !

Tomz said...

I smelt macabre and a a sort of mystery

Sriram said...

Hehehe.. you slammed the brakes on as usual in the last sentence :)

Nice build-up.. but the title gave it away :P

Jyoti said...

Ahaha loved the way you've built up the whole story.

But the title is such, we knew it was that throughout. :P

But nevertheless, interesting. Very interesting. :)

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Mon Espace said...

@Shravan : Yeah, well it was hard to miss ;) Thanks!

@Tomz: Wow...That's an amazing compliment, coming from you.

@Sriram & @Jyoti : Hmm...Maybe I should change it..

@Ghazala Khan: :)

n i t i n said...

ithentha ingane?

Pettannu theernu!!! *sob sob*

iniyum venam!!

jaggu said...

I cud predict the ending from the caption..

But nice build up n did this really happen in ur life ?? n r u both together these days.. u neva kno, these r '377' days..

Lolz, i am jus kiddin.. N i read ur interview here http://www.pakspectator.com/interview-with-blogger-mon-espace/

cool..

Thousif Raza M.B said...

lol lol and lol again, ha ha

nice one yaar

and what veda have you forgotten that i blog too????, come by when you are free ok


take care and keep writing.......

Ki said...

Haha! I didnt expect that one AT ALL!!!

Ki said...

Oops. 377. right. of course. *sheepish grin*

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

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NITISH said...

hehe.. veda.. r u tokin bout d mueseum palace grounds?... u were dere on 6th rit?... guess wat, i was dere 2.. a few frnds of mine from your skool saw u.. u and climax,u r made 4 each odr...

Ms. Neha Gandhi said...

hahhaa...thats really funny
wonder if this actually happened or just a figment of ur imagination

ani_aset said...

hahah omg :)
superb build up

Mon Espace said...

@Nitin: :)

@Jaggu: Thanks! and no we are not together..! *rolls eyes* :P

@thousif: I came..i saw..i commented :)

@Ki: haha, well it was called '377' originally. This way i figured it'd be a lil less obvious.. :)

@nitish: This did not happen at the museum, but yeah we did go there in the morning, and yes i'd met some school friends there as well :)

@Neha: The story & its characters are all true. not fiction. i wrote the post the same day it took place..

@Ani: first time here? :) Thanks!

Madhu said...

The last sentence is great...worth readin it all..:)

abdul hai said...

Fantastic

sawan said...

waaaa!! wut an end!! beautiful :)

pawan said...

Hey,
Nice one!
But I didn't understand what the title means though! Please do explain!
The description was super cool, and the narration pin point, need more?, the template is excellent and it only added to the essence of the post!


Cheers!

Amit414@IT-BHU said...

it's gr8 one :)

the end of this story is so interesting..:)

cheers!!!

pawan said...

I understood the titles significance!

Vinay said...

Atta girl!! :)

loved the built up .. and writing style, the description specially .. ya but i agree that title should have been something else ..

Mon Espace said...

Thanks guys! :)

radiorocker said...

Ha ha ha...

Da Rodent said...

what happened after that? :P

Da Rodent said...

what happened after that? :P